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Writer's Notes - March 2008



Age of Conversation: 100+ Authors Write to Raise Funds for Children's Charity

Today's the day to join the concerted effort of a dedicated group of people from all over the blogosphere (and all over the world) to drive last year's Age of Conversation collaborative book project to the top of the Amazon charts! Why? To raise awareness for the soon-to-be-published Age of Conversation 2008 sequel*--and simultaneously raise even more funds for Variety Children's Charity. (All monies raised through the books' sales and referrals go to Variety's Lifeline Children's Project.)



Join the Age of Conversation Bum Rush on March 29th



Two Bloggers Take On a Monumental Task

Spearheaded, organized, overseen, and edited by bloggers Drew McLellan and Gavin Heaton, the original Age of Conversation “brings together over 100 of the world’s leading marketers, writers, thinkers and creative innovators in a ground-breaking and unusual publication.” If you're interested in good writing, great wisdom on business and life, and helping sick children get well, please join this effort to bring the book the attention it deserves. As mentioned above, no one involved in this project will be making a profit from the book's production and sale: 100% of the proceeds will go to Variety Children's Charity (just as they will with the book's sequel).



Variety Children's Lifeline Program

Here's what Drew had to say about this charity in his Age of Conversation's Gift of Life post last year:

Lifeline's sole mission is providing medical assistance to children with treatable and survivable heart conditions in countries where the appropriate medical facilities, expertise or resources do not exist.



Today's Effort to Launch The Age of Conversation to the Top of the Charts Explained

Today's launch of the Age of Conversation Bum Rush is explained at Chris Wilson's Marketing Fresh Peel blog, in the following two posts: The Launch: The Age of Conversation Bum Rush and The Real Age of Conversation Bum Rush: March 29th. Please drop by and check out these posts. And if you feel this to be a worthy endeavor, consider joining these hard-working authors in helping to make a difference in the lives of sick children around the world by buying your copy of The Age of Conversation and encouraging others you know to do the same.

Please use the following link (or one of the specially designated links at other participating blogs) when purchasing The Age of Conversation. This will ensure that referral monies go to Variety Children's Charity, in addition to book sale proceeds.

Each purchase will only be counted once, regardless of how many books you purchase; so please buy each book separately (Super Saver shipping to the U.S. is free on this item)--and buy it TODAY--to help this charitable project gain greater recognition by rising to the top of the Amazon Best Seller List.


Hope you'll join us!
Jeanne


* While I wasn't among the authors of the original Age of Conversation, I will be on board for The Age of Conversation 2008--along with 274 other dedicated writers and bloggers. (What a wonderful way to use our writing talents--by helping others! I highly recommend it!)


INTERIM PROGRESS REPORT - 6 AM CST, MARCH 29TH: Between 2 pm CST, March 28th and 1:30 am CST, March 29th, the book's ranking rose from #102,282 to #16,879! Way to go, everyone! Further updates will be posted at Marketing Fresh Peel, in Chris's Launch post, and also on Twitter, throughout the day (info in the Launch post).

3:15 pm CST: AOC has jumped to #368! Keep up the good work, everyone!

AOC made it to #262 of all books sold at Amazon.com on March 29th. Not as high as we'd hoped, but not bad, at all! (At one point, it actually hit #33 in the Business/Investing category.) Great work, everyone!



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Challenging Conventional Wisdom

Conventional wisdom tells us much about what constitutes "good," or "quality" writing. But, is conventional wisdom always right?


The Conventional Principles of Good Writing

The following principles are, according to conventional wisdom, virtually indispensable to all good writing. I present them here, along with my own thoughts about each.


Brevity Equals Clarity

Principle 1: Avoid wordiness at all costs. Simplicity and brevity are always best. Use short sentences and few words to convey your ideas more clearly.

My Response: An overly concise writing style sacrifices literary smoothness and sophistication. Even in business writing, it's critically important to maintain an intelligent, professional, and authoritative tone, which is rarely accomplished by over-simplicity or excessive brevity.

I would, in fact, contend that the problem of unclear writing isn't at all caused by wordiness, per se, but rather by a lack of facility in the effective use of language to convey thought. When a writer makes every word count, crafting each sentence, clause, and phrase with care, words become the source of a richness and breadth of self-expression that would be impossible to achieve with fewer words and less-complex sentence structure.

Such writing unquestionably requires greater concentration and mental processing on the part of the reader. Yet that effort is rewarded by the pleasure of partaking in the gourmet literary fare the writer has created just for the reader's enjoyment. As writers, our job is not to spoon feed our readers miniscule servings of pablum, but to provide a fabulous spread of grand ideas beautifully garnished with well-chosen words and phrases.

Simple language has its place, to be sure. Yet, when we limit ourselves to its exclusive use, we deprive our readers of the transcendent power of language to raise our consciousness above the mundane, the everyday, the commonplace. We ground their imaginations, preventing them from reaching the heights of thought to which they are capable. And that is not what great writing is about.

As for sentence length, variation is the ideal. Breaking up more complex sentences by varying them with shorter ones can give the reader a much-needed breather, clearing the way for the next great idea. And just as too many complex sentences in a row without a break can cause mental "exhaustion" in a reader, so also can too many short sentences in a row have the opposite effect, creating an unpleasant, choppy, uncoordinated feel that leaves the reader bored and dissatisfied. Short sentences can deliver ideas with impact--but only when they are the exception and not the rule.


Passive Voice is Passe

Principle 2: Avoid passive voice (like the plague). Active voice is always best.

My Response: Passive voice has its place and can be used quite effectively to achieve a more detached, clinical, authoritative, or exalted tone. Voice is entirely dependent on the writer's purpose for a piece, and passive voice is simply one writing technique that can improve a piece of writing when properly used--and when not overused. Passive voice can provide a refreshing variation from active voice when used periodically to make a piece more interesting. Passive voice can also be used to create a less forward, challenging, or accusatory tone.

Don't fear passive voice; rather, use it with wisdom, discretion, and intention--or don't. The choice is entirely up to you. You certainly aren't required to use it; but don't feel as if you mustn't, either.* Passive voice, like any other writing technique, is simply one tool in the writer's arsenal--perhaps one of the more specialized tools, which are used less often than the standard ones--but, nevertheless, one which is there to be used when needed. In writing, as in everything else, we always want to use the right tool for the right job.


Adjectives Are Out

Principle 3: Use adjectives sparingly; in fact, remove as many of them as possible from your writing.

My Response: I've received many a chuckle from this rule, as I've studied the paragraphs in which various writers have expounded the rule, mentally removing all the adjectives that hadn't been removed by them (note the non-accusatory passive voice here), only to find that, alas, the paragraphs that remained made little sense. I fear that most of us are unaware of the importance of the much-maligned adjective.

In my view, there's absolutely nothing wrong with adjectives. They're wonderful creations, which, when properly used, can add much to our writing. There's little doubt that the adjective is sometimes overused and that it often causes laziness in our choice of nouns by allowing us the luxury of using less-colorful, less-descriptive, or less-precise nouns. But my personal belief is that it's far more important to remove adverbs from our writing than adjectives, because removing adverbs forces us to use livelier verbs, which energizes our writing.

Adjectives should never be used simply to avoid the work involved in mining our vocabularies for the right noun to express our thought. But, neither should we fear the well-placed adjective, which adds substance to a sentence and builds descriptive power into our writing.


Those are my personal thoughts on a few of the rules of conventional writing wisdom.


What do you think?
Jeanne

* This sentence illustrates the happy marriage of passive and active voice. The first clause is passive, the second active. (This entire paragraph in fact represents the friendly give and take between active and passive voice. As you can see by the unforced variation between them, the two can indeed peacefully coexist.)



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Online Fraud: Don't Be a Victim!

March 23rd 2008 23:17

A Few Comments Worth Repeating

The following information is adapted from a few comments I recently wrote here at Writer's Notes about online fraud. These comments expanded on the info presented in one of my earlier posts on the topic. I've decided to turn them into a post in their own right, because I believe this information is critical for everyone who uses the internet and e-mail to know--and since writers often use online payment processing services, such as PayPal, we must be particularly aware that we don't get scammed. (Many--if not most--people don't tend to read all the comments on a blog post, which means that most Writer's Notes readers have not had the benefit of reading this information.)


How to Tell When You're On a Spoof Website

Once on a website, if you right-click the webpage you're on and then click "Properties," you'll learn two things:

First, you'll learn the actual URL of the website--regardless of what they may have done to hide or manipulate it to make it seem like another site. (Note: The PayPal site's "Properties" window shows that the site is in fact PayPal, because it shows the authentic PayPal URL.)

Second, you'll learn whether or not the internet connection to the site is encrypted. If it isn't encrypted, it's not a secure site and therefore cannot be the real PayPal website. (Try this by right-clicking this Writer's Notes webpage. You'll see the exact URL--in this case the URL to this particular blog post--and you'll also see that this site's connection is not encrypted.)

Aside from the "Properties" window, another way to tell whether you're on a secure site is that the lock icon will appear in the status bar at the bottom of the web page. This is the only lock-icon location that indicates a secure site. If this icon is found anywhere else on the page, it means nothing. (Of course, it's possible that it could be found elsewhere on the page in ADDITION to the status bar--which is in fact the case with PayPal. But, if it's found ONLY on the web page and NOT in the status bar, the site is not secure.)

Apparently, some online con artists remove the status bar entirely to prevent visitors from noticing that the lock icon is missing. They then place an image of a lock somewhere on the web page to give the site a false air of legitimacy and security.

These things are so important for writers--and others--to know!


How to Avoid Phishing E-Mails

These cyber scammers are becoming more sophisticated, and it's definitely becoming more and more difficult to tell that their e-mails and websites are not the "real deal." But, there are ways to tell, and we can only do our best to educate others, hopefully helping to prevent them from becoming the prey of such dishonest individuals.

We must always be on our guard wherever online financial transactions are concerned--and of course, whenever we receive any e-mail that claims to relate to any type of financial transaction. It's absolutely crucial never to click a link in an e-mail that claims that it will take you to a website where you'll be able to complete any sort of "secure" financial transaction or where you're expected to "update" your personal information. I always pass my cursor over the link to see where it would have taken me before I DON'T click on it! Even if it appears legit, I visit the site via my web browser, instead of by clicking the link. If it doesn’t appear legit, I avoid it like the plague—and you should, too.


How to Tell When You’re About to Be Redirected to Another Website

In the case of unfamiliar web addresses that you type into your browser or copy and paste there, if you'll pass your cursor briefly over the "Go" button or arrow before clicking, you'll be shown the web address that you'll actually be taken to if you click "Go." (I learned this quite by mistake one day. I'd never noticed it before.) This is extremely valuable in cases where clicking a certain URL is actually designed to redirect you to an entirely different web address, hiding the fact that you aren't actually going to the website that you think you are.

(In the case just mentioned, I had actually been redirected to a site which supposedly sold cheap cigarettes. Maybe it was legit; maybe not. But I can't help but wonder why they would have needed to masquerade as an affiliate tool website in order to force traffic to their site if they were indeed honest businesspeople.)

There are many tools at our disposal that can help us to avoid being the victims of online fraud. But, we need to be informed that they exist and how we can best use them to protect ourselves and our vital personal information.

But, of course, knowing isn't enough. If we want to protect ourselves from online fraud, we have to take that knowledge and use it!

Stay safe,
Jeanne



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Some Health Facts to Get a Writer Thinking—About Bananas!

An e-mail that's making the rounds right now lists all the health benefits of the banana—which turns out to be a food that’s pretty-much under-appreciated. I found it quite fascinating to note that a number of the health benefits of this yellow-jacketed fruit are particularly applicable to the physical and mental faculties that help the writer more effectively engage in those activities that are essential to his or her craft.


Better Brain Power—and More!

Apparently, bananas can boost your brain power, increase your energy level, lower your blood pressure, calm your nerves, and decrease stress—all very helpful to the working writer! Of course, better overall health is as good for the writer as it is for everyone else, so all the other health benefits that bananas provide can help us keep our bodies in optimal running condition, providing better overall support to our minds for the task ahead!


Optimize the “Business” of Writing—With Bananas!

Because deadlines can’t wait, our busy schedules and frequent marathon writing sessions often cause us to eat a less-than-ideal diet. Here’s where the banana can come to our rescue, providing a variety of vitamins, minerals, and other health-building nutrients to keep us going longer and stronger, while simultaneously contributing to more acute mental processes. This can be helpful for the real nuts-and-bolts work of organizing our thoughts, doing our research, analyzing our data, planning our written work, handling the actual mechanics of writing, and editing our work into a finished piece.


Calm Your Nerves and Release Your Creativity—With Tryptophan!

It might even be argued that the tryptophan that bananas contain, which triggers the production of serotonin in our brains, causing feelings of calmness, relaxation, and well-being, is beneficial to our imaginations, putting us into a state of mind that’s more conducive to creativity. This creative state can help us to conceive bigger, better, more abundant ideas, write with greater flair, and create a better rapport—a real connection—with our readers.


Bananas: A Quick and Easy Brain and Body Building Snack

And who could ask for a quicker, easier snack! When we’re immersed in a really involved writing project, it can be quite tempting to grab whatever snack happens to be handy when those hunger pangs strike; and too often that turns out to be something that isn’t very good for our health. The banana provides a great alternative to chips and other non-nutritious snack foods.

Bananas do a body good!* And I think the writer can find some really valid reasons for making them a part of his or her daily writing routine!


An E-Mail Worth Passing On

The e-mail listing the many benefits of this extraordinary fruit follows:


The Amazing Banana

A professor at The Binscarth School For Higher Learning physiological psych class told his class about bananas. He said the expression "going bananas" is from the effects of bananas on the brain. Read on:

Never, put your banana in the refrigerator!!!

This is interesting. After reading this, you'll never look at a banana in the same way again.

Bananas contain three natural sugars - sucrose, fructose and glucose combined with fiber. A banana gives an instant, sustained and substantial boost of energy.

Research has proven that just two bananas provide enough energy for a strenuous 90-minute workout. No wonder the banana is the number one fruit with the world's leading athletes.

But energy isn't the only way a banana can help us keep fit. It can also help overcome or prevent a substantial number of illnesses and conditions, making it a must to add to our daily diet.

Depression: According to a recent survey undertaken by MIND amongst people suffering from depression, many felt much better after eating a banana. This is because bananas contain tryptophan, a type of protein that the body converts into serotonin, known to make you relax, improve your mood and generally make you feel happier.

PMS: Forget the pills - eat a banana. The vitamin B6 it contains regulates blood glucose levels, which can affect your mood.

Anemia: High in iron, bananas can stimulate the production of hemoglobin in the blood and so helps in cases of anemia.

Blood Pressure: This unique tropical fruit is extremely high in potassium yet low in salt, making it perfect to beat blood pressure. So much so, the US Food and Drug Administration has just allowed the banana industry to make official claims for the fruit's ability to reduce the risk of blood pressure and stroke.

Brain Power: 200 students at a Twickenham (Middlesex) school ( England ) were helped through their exams this year by eating bananas at breakfast, break, and lunch in a bid to boost their brain power. Research has shown that the potassium-packed fruit can assist learning by making pupils more alert.

Constipation: High in fiber, including bananas in the diet can help restore normal bowel action, helping to overcome the problem without resorting to laxatives.

Hangovers: One of the quickest ways of curing a hangover is to make a banana milkshake, sweetened with honey. The banana calms the stomach and, with the help of the honey, builds up depleted blood sugar levels, while the milk soothes and re-hydrates your system.

Heartburn: Bananas have a natural antacid effect in the body, so if you suffer from heartburn, try eating a banana for soothing relief.

Morning Sickness: Snacking on bananas between meals helps to keep blood sugar levels up and avoid morning sickness.

Mosquito bites: Before reaching for the insect bite cream, try rubbing the affected area with the inside of a banana skin. Many people find it amazingly successful at reducing swelling and irritation.

Nerves: Bananas are high in B vitamins that help calm the nervous system.

Overweight and at work? Studies at the Institute of Psychology in Austria found pressure at work leads to gorging on comfort food like chocolate and chips. Looking at 5,000 hospital patients, researchers found the most obese were more likely to be in high-pressure jobs. The report concluded that, to avoid panic-induced food cravings, we need to control our blood sugar levels by snacking on high carbohydrate foods every two hours to keep levels steady.

Ulcers: The banana is used as the dietary food against intestinal disorders because of its soft texture and smoothness. It is the only raw fruit that can be eaten without distress in over-chronicler cases. It also neutralizes over-acidity and reduces irritation by coating the lining of the stomach.

Temperature control: Many other cultures see bananas as a "cooling" fruit that can lower both the physical and emotional temperature of expectant mothers. In Thailand, for example, pregnant women eat bananas to ensure their baby is born with a cool temperature.

Seasonal Affective Disorder (SAD): Bananas can help SAD sufferers because they contain the natural mood enhancer tryptophan.

Smoking &Tobacco Use: Bananas can also help people trying to give up smoking. The B6, B12 they contain, as well as the potassium and magnesium found in them, help the body recover from the effects of nicotine withdrawal.

Stress: Potassium is a vital mineral, which helps normalize the heartbeat, sends oxygen to the brain and regulates your body's water balance. When we are stressed, our metabolic rate rises, thereby reducing our potassium levels. These can be re balanced with the help of a high-potassium banana snack.

Strokes: According to research in The New England Journal of Medicine, eating bananas as part of a regular diet can cut the risk of death by strokes by as much as 40%!

Warts: Those keen on natural alternatives swear that if you want to kill off a wart, take a piece of banana skin and place it on the wart, with the yellow side out. Carefully hold the skin in place with a plaster or surgical tape!


So, a banana really is a natural remedy for many ills. When you compare it to an apple, it has four times the protein, twice the carbohydrate, three times the phosphorus, five times the vitamin A and iron, and twice the other vitamins and minerals. It is also rich in potassium and is one of the best value foods around So maybe its time to change that well-known phrase so that we say, "A banana a day keeps the doctor away!"

PASS IT ON TO YOUR FRIENDS

PS: Bananas must be the reason monkeys are so happy all the time! I will add one here; want a quick shine on our shoes? Take the INSIDE of the banana skin, and rub directly on the shoe, and polish with a dry cloth. Amazing fruit!

One more PS: Even roses love bananas. For those of you that have roses, place banana peel strips about an inch below the dirt all around the rose bush. Good fertilizer. It sure is amazing!


So, what are you waiting for? Hurry to the nearest market and buy some!

Happy—and healthy—writing!
Jeanne

*This statement is not intended to apply to those who are allergic or otherwise sensitive to bananas or who suffer from kidney disease or other medical conditions which prevent the body from properly metabolizing potassium.


PLEASE NOTE: This post is not intended to constitute medical advice and should not be construed to suggest that anyone stop taking medication or other medical treatments prescribed by their physician without the advice of that physician.


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Words of Wit and Wisdom from Literary Minds

The following is another collection of writing quotes for us writers to enjoy. They come straight from the minds of a few of the well-known writers who have gone before. Without a doubt, these literary personalities have a great deal of collective knowledge and experience to share with us. So, fellow writers, sit back, read, learn, and enjoy--and perhaps you'll receive a spark of inspiration from their words, as well.


The Quotes

1. A writer and nothing else; a man alone in a room with the English language, trying to get human feelings right. ~ John K. Hutchens ~

2. The greatest part of a writer's time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book. ~ Samuel Johnson ~

3. Never write anything that does not give you great pleasure. Emotion is easily transferred from the writer to the reader. ~ Joseph Joubert ~

4. Writing is the incurable itch that possesses many. ~ (Decimus Junius Juvenalis) Juvenal ~

5. The cure for writers cramp is writer's block. ~ Inigo de Leon ~

6. As I take up my pen I feel myself so full, so equal to my subject, and see my book so clearly before me in embryo, I would almost like to try to say it all in a single word. ~ Georg C. Lichtenberg ~

7. Writing crystallizes thought and thought produces action. ~ Paul J. Meyer ~

8. I am always interested in why young people become writers, and from talking with many I have concluded that most do not want to be writers working eight and ten hours a day and accomplishing little; they want to have been writers, garnering the rewards of having completed a best-seller. They aspire to the rewards of writing but not to the travail. ~ James A. Michener ~

9. Writing is the hardest way of earning a living, with the possible exception of wrestling alligators. ~ Olin Miller ~

10. Like stones, words are laborious and unforgiving, and the fitting of them together, like the fitting of stones, demands great patience and strength of purpose and particular skill. ~ Edmund Morrison ~



The Effect of these Quotes on the Writer

Hope these quotes have spoken to you in one way or another. Perhaps they've struck a chord that brought a truth home to you in an especially poignant way. Perhaps you were able to relate a quoted thought to your own experience. Or possibly one of these sayings taught you a truth you never understood before. Even if your only reaction to reading them was a smile, a nod, or a few moments of entertainment, they will have served their purpose.

Yet, the best result that could come from these sayings would be that they send you to your keyboard with a renewed desire...to write!


Happy writing!
Jeanne



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Writing Contest Deadline Extended to March 13th

In a post written earlier today--nano Contest Stays Open until March 13th--Brad Shorr has extended the deadline for his Word Sell Writing Contest until 5pm Central time on March 13th. Because he didn't receive the minimum 10 entries needed to give away the 8 GB iPod Nano ($200 value), Brad has graciously decided to give us all another crack at the prize.


About the Contest

Specific contest rules are posted at the second link above, but the gist of the contest is this: Entrants must write a blog post based on a cartoon that Brad has posted at his blog. It's a great opportunity to get creative, using one of Brad's fantastic cartoons for inspiration, while at the same time placing yourself in the running for the drawing for the iPod Nano. Sounds like a winning combination to me!

I've already posted my entry, and it's been very interesting to see the differing approaches of various bloggers who have entered so far. There's really a great deal of latitude here for each blogger's own interpretation of this cartoon, which is one of the most fascinating aspects of this contest--other than the possibility of winning the iPod, that is!


Hurry and Get Your Entry In

Why not drop by Word Sell and check it out! You never know whether inspiration might not strike like a bolt of lightning once you've looked at the cartoon! (Case in point: This isn't the first time one of Brad's cartoons has inspired me to write a blog post. The first time I did it, I didn't even have the possibility of winning an iPod to motivate me. Brad's cartoons are motivation enough in their own right.)

So, hurry over to Word Sell, read the contest rules, look over the cartoon, and get your creative juices flowing! Enter this fun contest, and who knows, you may soon be the proud owner of a brand new iPod Nano!


Good luck!
Jeanne



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Right, Wrong, and Law

The person who is devoted to doing good, to loving God, and loving people tends to do what’s right naturally. He doesn’t need to be told what to do. He doesn’t need to have the rules and regulations spelled out and placed before him repeatedly. And while he is by no means perfect, and even fails at times, he knows what’s right, and his goal is to do it.

He may occasionally need a little encouragement, a touch of inspiration, or a little reminder now and then—after all, none of us is perfect, yet—but by and large, his actions square with his personal ideals, which tend to mesh with society’s general consensus of good versus evil and of legal versus illegal.


Writing and Its Laws

In a similar sense, the writer who loves words, thoughts, and noble ideas, and is willing to surrender to her creativity and inspiration also tends to almost miraculously fulfill the “laws” of good writing. And while writing is, to a large extent, an intellectual exercise, there’s a sense in which the ability to write in this almost “exalted” manner is a matter of the heart and not the head.


In Writing, as in Law, Heart Can Neither Be Legislated Nor Taught

In the same sense that goodness cannot be legislated, inspiration and creativity cannot be taught. One can study and practice the principles of good writing all he desires; but if he lacks the spark of creativity… inspiration… imagination— of innate talent, if you will— the principles of writing will do him little good. His writing will be cold…dry…clinical—perhaps technically correct, yet lacking in heart.


Heart-Learning, as Opposed to Book-Learning

By the same token, the writer whose talent, creativity, and inspiration come from deep within may not be well-studied in the principles of “good” writing, the nuances of grammar, or the particulars of punctuation; yet he wields his words with power, delivers his message with impact, and wraps the fingers of emotion around the hearts of his readers in ways they couldn’t possibly understand. Like the person who does good without needing to be shown the laws that say he must, this writer is a law unto himself.

While far more could be said on this topic, these are a few of my musings about “the Law” as it applies to writing.

May you always be a law unto yourself when it comes to your writing!

Best wishes,
Jeanne


This post is my entry to the Middle Zone Musings “What I Learned From…the Law” group writing project.



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Could You Use Internet for Life?

How would you like to know that your high-speed internet service would be covered for life? I know I would. That would be a dream-come-true for any online writer or blogger. Well, it could happen.

If you live in an area that offers Charter Internet service, you may be eligible to bid, auction-style on Charter High-Speed Internet service for life, including a modem and installation. (Starting bid is $10, and Charter has no idea what the final bid will be.) It would certainly be helpful for any online writer or blogger to win that bid.


Or Perhaps You'd Like to Win a Wii

Aside from bidding on Charter's internet service, you can also enter their drawing to win a Nintendo Wii. The Wii comes complete with a whole list of accessories--everything you need to use the system, including several games. (More on that later.) If playing video games is a form of relaxation you enjoy between articles, poems, or blog posts--or if you happen to have a teen at home who would just love to own a Wii--the contest might be an opportunity for you to get one of your own.


More Info on the Bidding

Bidding on the Charter High-Speed Internet service for life package will begin March 12th and run until March 26th. Registration is required to participate, and you may register between now and March 11th. You'll need to qualify by zip code. (This is how Charter will determine whether you live in an area serviced by Charter High-Speed Internet.) Once you've qualified, you'll be able to participate in the bidding for the fastest internet service offered by Charter. You'll find complete auction rules at the link below.


More Sweepstakes Info

You'll also be able to register for the drawing to win the Nintendo Wii. If you're the winner, here's what you'll get: "a Nintendo Wii Console, Wii Stand, 5 Sports games (Boxing, Baseball, Tennis, Golf and Bowling), 1 Remote Controller, 1 Nunchuk Controller, 1 Sensor Bar, 1 Wii AC Adapter, 1 Wii AV Cable"--everything you need to play. If the sweepstakes interests you, Click Here for a Chance to Win a Nintendo® Wii™!

It sure would be great if you won one or the other--or both!

Good luck!
Jeanne



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FreelanceWriting.Com is simple, straightforward, yet attractively laid out--a site that packs a huge amount of helpful information into one convenient corner of cyberspace.


An Extensive Variety of Resources

You'll find newsletters covering everything from the craft of writing, the business of marketing your writing, and a wide variety of markets you can market your writing to. You'll find writing contests, writing articles, writing news and events, and even writer's guidelines--enough to keep you busy for quite some time. You'll also find free e-books and essays on various aspects of writing and publishing, author interviews, discussion forums, podcasts, videocasts, job feeds, RSS feeds, and freelance recruiter lists, as well as Private Label Rights producers to help you earn income. You name it; this site offers it.


Writing Success Awaits!

Visit FreelanceWriting.Com and take full advantage of all the tools it provides to move you closer to your writing goals. I believe you'll find it a useful addition to your present list of favorite writing resource sites. If you haven't got this one bookmarked yet, I'd highly recommend it. Its many resources could provide just the push you need to propel you forward toward writing success.


Hope they will!
Jeanne



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Word Sell Carwash Cartoon
Cartoon used with permission of Brad Shorr, Word Sell, Inc.



Words: A Writer’s Perspective

Words: the writer’s stock-in-trade…the intellectual currency with which we transact our business of touching the hearts and minds of those for whom we write

Words: the attire with which we dress our thoughts before sending them forth to greet our reader, make his or her acquaintance, and hopefully create a wonderful first—and lasting—impression

Words: the vehicles which transport ideas across streets or across continents, spreading them far and wide for all to encounter on near or foreign mental soil

Words: the soul-fed fires which ignite emotions…passions…hopes…and dreams…inspiring action while themselves sitting dormant on the page…or, no sooner spoken, dissipating, like a cooling summer’s breeze

Words: the silken threads of color woven artfully into tapestries of beauty, strength, and grace by artisans who patiently hone their skills and ply their craft with care

Words.


Using Words Effectively

As writers, we are intimately involved with words. We use them every day to convey meaning. Yet, the degree of meaning we succeed in imparting to our readers through our words is directly proportional to the degree of skill with which we use them.

The Book of Proverbs contains a wonderful saying about using words effectively:

“A word fitly spoken is like apples of gold in settings of silver.” –Proverbs 25:11 (NKJV*)

What a lovely picture of the carefully chosen word!


The Writer’s Job

Our job as writers is to continually seek the best possible words to convey the precise thoughts we intend our reader to take away from our work. At times these words won’t come immediately, or easily, and we’ll have little choice but to think a while longer—maybe even to go back to that section later, or even tomorrow, looking at it with fresh eyes, a fresh perspective, and a fresh infusion of thought and inspiration.


Don't Let Deadlines Create Carelessness

Yet, when we face a deadline and have no time to wait for inspiration to strike—no time to let our writing “age” and return to it tomorrow—we simply have to tough it out. We must refuse to give in to the temptation to use a careless word or phrase—one that we know deep inside just isn’t “right.” (And the temptation to do so can be strong.) We need, instead, to mentally wrestle with the thought, to visualize the image we hope to convey, and pull from somewhere within ourselves—or if need be our thesauruses—the word that paints the most vivid picture of the thought we’re envisioning so the world can see it, too.


Poorly Chosen Words Create Misunderstanding

When we refuse to take the time to choose our words with care—and no doubt about it, that’s hard work—we’re often misunderstood. Our job as writers, then, is to anticipate the information the reader will require for accurately processing our ideas and then distill that information into a form (word, phrase, sentence, line) that the reader can grab hold of mentally and make sense of. This gives our readers satisfaction as they read our work—a sense of connection with our own thought process which helps them relate to our words and appropriate their meaning for themselves.


The Final Read-Through and Revision

When we’ve come to the end of a piece of writing (a blog post, article, chapter, or poem), we still aren’t finished yet. No matter how wonderful we feel about the job we’ve done, how clever we think our work is, or how pleased we are with ourselves, there’s one more step that we ignore to our peril: We absolutely must reread our work for structure, rhythm, sense, and flow. The very best way to do this is aloud, because sound is an important indicator of trouble in one or more of these areas.


Finishing Touches

As you read, look—or better yet, listen—for awkward phrasing, confusing sentence structure, unclear meaning, or unpleasing, abrupt, or non-melodious language. Be sure you’ve used transitions that draw your reader smoothly and effortlessly through your text, creating literary bridges from one paragraph or sentence to the next. Take special note of the word order you’ve chosen and the rhythmic effect it creates, and when needed, reorder your words to give your writing a smoother, more fluid quality.


Ruthless Revision

You’ll nearly always find sections you thought were absolutely brilliant while writing them that on final read-through sound confusing and unclear. Please do your readers a favor and revise them—regardless of how clever or inspired they may have seemed at the time. We often become enamored with our phrasing, and convincing ourselves to let it go can be a struggle. But always remember that there’s lots more inspiration where that came from, so you can afford to cut a clever phrase for the sake of clarity.


The Finished Product

When we’ve finished revising our work, our goal is to have a piece of writing that’s clear, engaging, and easy for our audience to read, understand, and enjoy. And at all costs, we want to avoid repeating the mistake made by our friend in the above cartoon. He either didn’t give enough advance thought to the wording of his sign, or he didn’t reread it before posting it. (If he did reread it, he did so without considering the possible ways the public might construe it.) And that’s a mistake we never want to make with our writing.


Happy revising!
Jeanne


* New King James Version


This post is my entry to Brad Shorr's Word Sell Writing Contest.



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Some Thoughts by Writers on Writing

Perhaps some of these quotes will inspire you. Some may cause you to shake your head. Maybe others will bring a smile to your lips. Some might even make you want to prove the writer wrong. But, whatever else they do, I hope these quotes will get you thinking about the wonderful vocation--or avocation, as the case may be for you--of writing. Hopefully they will plant some ideas that will spring up and bear fruit in your own writing in one way or another.


The Quotes

1. The free-lance writer is a man who is paid per piece or per word or perhaps. ~ Robert Benchley ~

2. To write what is worth publishing, to find honest people to publish it, and get sensible people to read it, are the three great difficulties in being an author. ~ Charles Caleb Colton ~

3. Writing isn't hard. It isn't any harder than ditch-digging.
~ Patrick Dennis
~

4. The writer isn't made in a vacuum. Writers are witnesses. The reason we need writers is because we need witnesses to this terrifying century. ~ E. L. Doctorow ~

5. I never know what I think about something until I read what I've written on it. ~ William Faulkner ~

6. He who does not expect a million readers should not write a line. ~ Johann Wolfgang Von Goethe ~

7. The writer probably knows what he meant when he wrote a book, but he should immediately forget what he meant when he's written it. ~ William Golding ~

8. A writer should be a joyous optimist. Anything that implies rejection of life is wrong for a writer. ~ George Gribbon ~

9. The characteristic of Chaucer is intensity: of Spencer, remoteness: of Milton elevation and of Shakespeare everything.
~ William Hazlitt
~

10. You must often make erasures if you mean to write what is worthy of being read a second time; and don't labor for the admiration of the crowd, but be content with a few choice readers. ~ Horace ~


Happy contemplating!
Jeanne



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An Invaluable Resource Clearinghouse for Writers

If you're a writer and you haven't yet visited John Hewitt's Writer's Resource Center, you don't know what you're missing! And if you've been there before but haven't stopped by lately, it's high time you made a return visit! John's blog is a veritable treasure trove of information helpful to writers--both in improving their craft and promoting/marketing their work.


John Does Your Research for You

By scouring the internet for valuable resources--and thereby saving the busy writer an incredible amount of time--John is able to provide writers with links to writing jobs and a plethora of websites and blog posts that offer tools, wisdom, insight, and practical advice on every conceivable aspect of writing and/or blogging.

One example of the huge amount of writing info John gathers into one place for the writer's convenience is his 3/2/08 Sunday Link Love post. Why not stop by, check out the fantastic information he's offered in this post, and then give it a Stumble. (If you're reading this much later than that date, visit John's blog anyway via the main link above to find his most recent resource lists--and don't forget to give them a Stumble to show John how much you appreciate all his hard work!)


A Great Place to Find Writing Jobs

Here's another example of just how much John has to offer his readers: This Week's Writing Jobs. You'll also love the Writer's Resource Center - Job Roll feature, which provides web-based search results for writing jobs, broken down into categories, and accessed via convenient links in John's sidebar. Here's a sample of what you'll find when you click his Freelance Writing link: freelance writer jobs. Other categories include General Writing, Copywriting, Editing, Online/Web, and Proofreading. John also offers writing job lists broken down by state. (To access the links to these and other writing job categories, visit John's main website, linked to in the first paragraph of this post, and click the appropriate link in his sidebar.)


A Site Worth Bookmarking

Whether or not you've ever been to Writer's Resource Center before, do yourself a big favor and take a few minutes to drop by. And why not bookmark the site while you're at it. I'm sure it's a link you'll be using again and again.

Happy resource-gathering!
Jeanne



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February '08 Comment Recognition

It's time, once again, to recognize my loyal readers who have left comments at Writer's Notes during the month of February, 2008.


You Contribute So Much!

I so appreciate each one of your comments! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts, opinions, ideas, and experiences here at Writer's Notes! I truly enjoy hearing what you have to say, and reading your insights, experiences, and viewpoints is a pleasure! Thanks for making the month of February so special through both your visits and your input! It's been fun!


February '08 Commenters: The List

The following is a list (in no particular order) of all the wonderful people who have left comments at Writer's Notes during February, 2008:

AmyHuang, at Travel String

Joanne Fedler, at Secret Writers Business

Tracy, at Movies and Life

Brad Shorr, at Word Sell, Inc.

Lillie Ammann, at A Writer's Words, An Editor's Eye

Michele Tune, at Writing the Cyber Highway

Joanna Young, at Confident Writing

Laura Spencer, at Writing Thoughts

Robert Hruzek, at Middle Zone Musings

Lynn Smythe, at Freelance Online Work

Sharon Hurley Hall, at Get Paid to Write Online

Dianna G, at Fictional Worlds

Cindy Nichols, at Kaleidoscope

JP Shaw, at Sassy Ink Author

Lilla, at Enviro Warrior

Rosemary, at Alpaca Notes

James Rickard, at Angling Fish

Merle

Susan Keeping, of What's in a Word?

Rebecca Laffar-Smith, of Writers Round-About

Matt Jones, of Blogging Fingers

Tina

Mark Goodyear, at Good Word Editing

Yvonne Russell, at Grow Your Writing Business

Tom Colvin, at Becoming A Writer Seriously

Norm


Thanks So Much for Your Comments!

Thanks, again for making the Writer's Notes conversation so much richer by visiting and sharing your thoughts, insights, and personal experiences in response to my posts!


Gratefully yours,
Jeanne




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